Susan Foster
Mar 12, 2021

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I wonder if it would have been better if you had used your other photo (of the woman sleeping) as your display photo. It took me a minute to process the title ... for some reason, I guess because of the cat, my mind went first to 4H instead of comprehending what "4AMer" meant.

Maybe using smaller topic lines might have helped too in this short piece - the way you have it now may be a little overwhelming for the content.

That being said, I love short reads like this one, especiallly when they get right to the point of the article with some advice. Yours does exactly that. I liked it!

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Susan Foster
Susan Foster

Written by Susan Foster

Susan lives in Montana with her husband and a clever Jenga-playing dog. The author of a regrettably neglected blog, she hopes to publish her debut novel soon.

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